- Relating the paper to my personal experiences to show the reader insight into my topic
- Trying to show that although high school dropout rates among hispanics are high, there are others that succeed
- Going to interview a teacher that teaches English to ESL students (my teacher from high school)
Weaknesses:
- Bring more ratios about hispanic high school dropout rates
- Instead of looking for "hispanics", it will be better to look for "hispanic immigrants" that know English as their second language
- Look for more facts about those who have succeeded in high school
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