* The best idea that I got from my peer was to include a time within the story when I became really frustrated about my transition. That was an excellent idea! I think that will make my story even better, and also more interesting.
2. The idea that I don't agree with it?
* I totally agreed with everything my peer said.
3. My draft needs?
* My draft needs grammar and punctuation corrections, and also to include one pitfall that I had while in school.
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